[rodi]

i see your point, but some of the issues stated for No. 1, 5 and 7, specifically, should really be noted. Those aren't style attributes - those are amateur errors that, if he read them, will never worry about again. Do you not agree with those points (regarding framing, etc)? Aren't they supposed to be common knowledge? I wasn't intending to be amusing or harsh, but felt those points needed some criticism for betterment.
I come from architecture design school - critiques are hated but everyone knows how beneficial they are.