|
Oh man, thanks Rodi. I totally missed that black slit in the upper right and it'll be an easy fix.
I was going for mid-greys, but I like your suggestions about exposure. (I did pump things up and down and landed on this look on purpose). I DID have time to shoot more around the people. I actually had one without them. There's an escalator that the one faced toward our right went down, but, yes, I should have invested more time to add clarity there.
I like your Salk a ton, but that black shape floating toward the right side of infinity is bothering me. I can't figure what it is and it's calling attention to itself because it's totally black. The rich colors and perspective are wonderful as is the balance in the composition.
Hopefully someone else will comment further on your image since I came back to answer your questions mainly.
Dave
|